Thomas

   
Backpack Backpack
I was at a friends party,and i have this backpack that I never take off. I walked in and after about an hour we started to dance, so I thought it would be a good idea to take my backpack off. INCORRECT! I put my bag in the corner and went back to continue dancing. After dancing for about two more hours I went to get my bag, so I could go sit down and chill on the couch. I walked to go grab my bag then, BOOM! My bag was nuggeted. That’s where someone flips your bag inside out. From that time on I never take my backpack off. My backpack is an addiction.                                           
                                                                                                                                                                    (This is the all time famous Dora Backpack Song
 I chose this song because it was a catchy song 
        about backpacks)


(This is my backpack
when it is nuggeted)
There was a time where I was at McDonald's and my backpack was irritating my back, so I took it off. I was finished eating my food and was rushing for the bus. We got on the bus and got all the way to our stop, then I realized I didn't have my bag. I hurried to grab my phone so I could call them. They answered and said they had my bag. I got on the bus going back and finally got my bag, after the long dreaded, scary hour I finally had it back. Then we got back on the bus and finally we made it home. My bag and I safely. My backpack is a friend that is constantly wrapping he’s arms around me. Bang, bang, this is an amazing backpack. My backpack is an addiction.


(This is my everyday
backpack, that never
leaves my back)
(I chose this because this is a song about backpacks)

2 comments:

  1. Thomas: i like the sentence were you said my backpack is a friend that is always wrapping his arms around me because i thought it was clever. the line i liked was also my favorite metaphor of yours. reading your vignette makes me feel like your a dork. -Tate H

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  2. Thomas: I like your song choices, they are real funny. I like the metaphor that you used about your backpack being an addiction. I like how you used your literary device onomatopoeia because it went well with your vignette. Your vignette made me feel happy, but I CANT relate to you because I always put my bag down.
    #YOURLOVE<3Wade

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