Backpack Backpack
I was at a friends party,and i have this backpack that I never take off. I walked in and after about an hour we started to dance, so I thought it would be a good idea to take my backpack off. INCORRECT! I put my bag in the corner and went back to continue dancing. After dancing for about two more hours I went to get my bag, so I could go sit down and chill on the couch. I walked to go grab my bag then, BOOM! My bag was nuggeted. That’s where someone flips your bag inside out. From that time on I never take my backpack off. My backpack is an addiction.
(This is the all time famous Dora Backpack Song
I chose this song because it was a catchy song
about backpacks)
(This is the all time famous Dora Backpack Song
I chose this song because it was a catchy song
about backpacks)
(This is my backpack when it is nuggeted) |
There was a time where I was at McDonald's and my backpack was irritating my back, so I took it off. I was finished eating my food and was rushing for the bus. We got on the bus and got all the way to our stop, then I realized I didn't have my bag. I hurried to grab my phone so I could call them. They answered and said they had my bag. I got on the bus going back and finally got my bag, after the long dreaded, scary hour I finally had it back. Then we got back on the bus and finally we made it home. My bag and I safely. My backpack is a friend that is constantly wrapping he’s arms around me. Bang, bang, this is an amazing backpack. My backpack is an addiction.
(I chose this because this is a song about backpacks)
Thomas: i like the sentence were you said my backpack is a friend that is always wrapping his arms around me because i thought it was clever. the line i liked was also my favorite metaphor of yours. reading your vignette makes me feel like your a dork. -Tate H
ReplyDeleteThomas: I like your song choices, they are real funny. I like the metaphor that you used about your backpack being an addiction. I like how you used your literary device onomatopoeia because it went well with your vignette. Your vignette made me feel happy, but I CANT relate to you because I always put my bag down.
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